Book 1: Passionate Alliance
Jed Brown, also known as Grey Wolf teams up with a Cheyenne Chief named Giant Bear in order to track the Shadow Killers after both their families are brutally murdered. With his final breath, Jed's son tells his father the killers are after a woman in Dakota. Who she is nobody seems to know, whether North or South Dakota is a mystery! Once in the Dakota Territory, the two men meet a woman destined to help them; unknown to all is that she is the ultimate target.
Melissa Ray will do almost anything to keep the job she loves even if it means giving up all hopes of love, a husband, or children; the betrayal of one she trusts... followed by the massacre of almost everyone at her ranch, plus a long-forgotten event from her past resurfacing will test her resolve. She must struggle to keep herself from crossing a line that will destroy all the years of hard work she has accomplished.
In the attempt to rescue Melissa's crippled father from the desperado's of her past, she falls in love with Jed Brown the tortured drifter searching for justice. Are their trials over yet or will the love they share be tested over and over again... can it survive? Between outlaws and the furious brother of Giant Bear's wife, their love will be driven to the very limits… maybe even beyond!
Melissa and Giant Bear's wife both disappear mysteriously on their wedding day when a scheme of revenge against the woman who shot his brothers ensnares them all. With the two men killed in the process, who will save the women now.
Book 2: Raven and the Golden Eagle
Chief Giant Bear, blood brother to Jed Brown, had successfully lived all these years by his vow to find a way to live in peace with the white man. Now he finds himself in a quandary as a vision gone awry causes a chain reaction that will not stop snowballing; even Golden Dove his beautiful blonde wife turns against him. In desperation, he tries to save his people by forcing his beloved granddaughter into marriage with a reluctant captive Englishman.
Raven known to the people as their 'Protector', must stop not only her grandfather from forcing her into a loveless marriage but also the massacre of her people if she refuses to marry the Englishman. In her quest, she unearths a plot to take over the land as greed and hatred for her grandfather's peaceful ways threatens their way of life.
Devon, known as Lord Rochester the second son of the Earl of Rochester in England, had travelled thousands of miles in order to live for one year on a barren piece of land in the middle of the savage Montana wilderness. His grandfathers will stipulate he couldn't sell it otherwise. Disillusioned by court life and hating what the English nobility had become, he views this new change as an opportunity to get away from the life he hated; in the back of his mind was the possibility of starting a new life, even though his purpose in coming here is to sell it. Everything changes when his wagon train is wiped out by a Cheyenne war party and he is drawn unwillingly into a struggle between the peaceful bear tribe of the Cheyenne and an unknown source. The only way to save these people is to sacrifice his freedom and marry the granddaughter of the chief, but should he!
Mell and Jed must race from North Dakota to Western Montana to reach Giant Bear with a warning from the Cheyenne's sacred white buffalo before it is too late to save them all.
Book 3: Dream Dancer & the Celtic Witch
Earl Edward Summerset, the three quarter Cheyenne grandson of Chief Giant Bear; known to his people as Dream Dancer, finally finishes his schooling and becomes Doctor Summerset. He learns as he reaches manhood at the court of Queen Victoria the intricacies, power, and betrayal that the English nobility is capable of exhibiting! As his power grows within him, he must learn to become just like the people that would use him… cold and secretive.
Edward becomes drawn unexpectedly into a battle to save a reluctant Welsh heiress from the evil clutches of her cousin. Will he succeed in helping her or will he find himself in more danger than he thought possible as a power lying dormant since the beginning of time comes to life; sensing a way to be released, it tries to gain control of Dream Dancer through the Celtic Witch. Thwarted by another power it must find another way.
Crystin, the Lady of Llannor Castle… goddaughter, as well as a distant relation to Queen Victoria, wakes up with no memories and only the assurance of the Queen herself to go by. Betrothed against her will to the mysterious black-haired Earl of Summerset, whom she just learned was a savage from another country; she fights an inner struggle with herself to remember who she is. Starring at the stranger in the mirror, she touches her pure white hair then shudders in revulsion. The Celtic woman was sure it was not supposed to be this colour, but what could have happened to her to cause this! Putting her hand on her distended belly, she feels an unexpected maternal feeling. How she became pregnant was just as much a mystery to her as her pure white hair. She was sure she had never met Edward before so how could she be six months pregnant by him. Struggling to understand, she clutches the Celtic dragon medallion she was never without, but even it gave her no answers… only more questions!
awesome book!!!!
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Subject: Passionate Alliances
From: naomi@stimulating-conversation.com
To: lorettabeaver@hotmail.com
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Hi Loretta,
I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you about your book.
Let me start with all that is good to very good about your book:
The basic story line and sub-stories are wonderful.
The flow is pretty good
I like your voice and style.
Now for what I think would improve your book and make it a much better more marketable book:
Get the book edited by a professional editor. The large number of spelling and grammatical errors will turn off many people. (One you frequently use in correctly is Their and There)
The book can use some tightening. That is there are parts that don't move the plot or develop characters that could be trimmed.
You finished and published a book - congratulations! This is a terrific accomplishment in and of itself. Now you can refine and polish your book and have a great book.
Good luck and keep us posted.
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Naomi Giroux
Starting the buzz about your book
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Naomi Giroux
Starting the buzz about your book
www.Stimulating-conversation.com
Hope to get many more reviews from not only professionals but also my many fans in and around Alberta.
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